Littered With Grammatical and Stylistic Term Paper

4. The paper is very well presented but simply needs grammar and stylistic corrections. The author obviously has a good grasp of the topic and organized his or her ideas. By cleaning up bad grammar in phrases like "they are a minimum of opinions," this could be a good paper. The use of first person is fine, but the author might have improved that by including anecdotes instead of just making flat statements like "These are also done on near misses sometimes. I have seen both done where I work."

5. The paper is definitely a persuasive essay, and makes a clear argument for workplace drug testing. One of its key strengths is the author's ability to anticipate audience objections and refute those with evidence. Even though readers may not agree with the "war on drugs" launched by Nancy Reagan, the…